Enjoy it while you can.
Soon after you're stabbed
In the back by a friend
Dearer than a brother,
Not a thing in the whole
Entire world will be
Enjoyable.
3 nights and three days you have
And then only heaven
Knows.
It's not bad, I think. Needs a lot of work. I wonder if the joke in it is clear. Hopefully it is.
And here is another, slightly darker (CAN IT BE???) product of my failed attempts:
With all my soul I hate her.
But can only say, I love you.
It pains me every time we touch.
Her smile is poison flowing into my lungs.
Her laugh is a demon tormenting me.
Her long black hair is a bundle of chords
Wound 'round my heart,
Locking the hatred in.
But, in her mind, and on the outside,
I love her.
Haha. I love this poem. Absolute fiction though it is, it is creepy, I find. I think tomorrow I'm gonna have a little experience... I'll try not to talk or react to anyone for the whole day. It'll be hard with a four-year-old around.
I'll update you with another failure later. (my experience)
Oh, and congrats Lance for the 7th consecutive TdF win. And good luck in retirement.
Now, my readers, bis später!
Adonis-lost in a crevasse zwischen fools and geniuses.
