I'm a maniac in love!
I lose sleep, finding thoughts,
All notions of her.
And, oh, ever since I saw her,
Teary-eyed and lonely,
Her beauty outstanding,
Restlessness enslaves me
As sleep eludes me.
Sadly, I'm sure that if I
Did manage to lose conciousness
And to fade into an unblemmished,
Lulling sleep, I'd be disturbed
By sweet nightmares
Of Her.
Adonis
10\28\2004
said...
Nice poem! Very romantic. Oh this is Jenna by the way...since you dislike anonymous posts. :P See ya in school
said...
It's jenna again...I got a blogspot thing so it'll be easier for u lOl
http://invisible2you.blogspot.com/
check it out sumtime...ttyl
said...
Adonis,
That poem really did take my breath away. It was so beautiful and amazing. Grrrr... I just still can't get over the fact that you speak more gooder english then I does. LoL. But you really do have an awesome talent with words and putting them all together. Well see you on the bus my friend. :)
~Rachel Louise~
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